The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar canes. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the information about

whole

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production

process

of

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Overall

,

it is clear that

there are total

7

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of 7

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steps to make

sugar

from raw materials.

In addition

, in the manufacturing

process

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the form of

sugar

canes

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cane

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turn into

juice

and syrup. Before the

process

begins,

sugar

canes

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cane

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are grown by farmers. It normally takes 12 to 18 months to be fully

growned

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grown

. When they are ready to be harvested, the farmers start to work on gathering

sugar

canes

either using machines or using handy tools.

Next,

sugar

canes

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cane

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are crushed into sweet

juice

with a huge

juice

maker. After sugary

juice

is made, it needs to be purified by

limestone

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filter in order to get rid of impurities like

dirts

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dirt

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. Pure

juice

is put into an evaporator which is heated by fire to make syrup.

The next step is

centrifuge

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the centrifuge

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process

, which separates

sugar

crystals from the syrup. Separated

sugar

powders are dried and cooled in the final step, they are

finally

ready to be sold.