The table below shows social and economic indicators for dour countries in 1994, according to united Nations statistics --DELETED LINK--

The table below shows social and economic indicators for dour countries in 1994, according to united Nations statistics

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The table illustrates the social and economic status of
people
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living in 4 countries in 1994.
Overall
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, annual income generally reflects life expectancy and adult literacy rate.
People
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in Canada and Japan are healthier and more educated than Peru and Zaire.
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the table, the annual salary the individuals received in Canada and Japan far exceeds that of Peru and Zaire.
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, Japanese
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gain $15760 per year, the highest of the 4 countries being compared
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only $130 is paid to employees in Zaire, being the lowest. The financial security in the nation leads to the longevity and sophistication of the
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. It is apparent that Japanese and Canadian life expectancy is longer than the other two nations. Zaira has the lowest literacy rate at 34%
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to 91% in Canada and Japan.
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, the amount of calories that
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consume does not necessarily match their health conditions because Canadian
people
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, whose consumption of calories is the largest, live shorter than Japanese by 2 years.
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