The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above graph represents the proportion of different
species
of
turtles
in India for the time period between 1980 to 2012. the different types of
turtles
are shown by lines of various colours.
Overall
, olive ridley
turtles
were in majority and showed an increasing trend throughout the years,
in contrast
to
this
leatherback
turtles
were least found and diminished in subsequent years. green
turtles
and
overall
species
of
turtles
showed a stable trend and their population remained almost the same in
this
time period. Considering all the
species
to be 100 in 1980, Leatherback
turtles
rose and their number peaked at 110 in 1987
then
fall gradually with every year to touch the value of 50 in 2012.
While
olive ridley
turtles
on the other hand
followed a rapid incline from 100 in 1980 up to 140 in 2012. Green
turtles
remained almost the same with about 100 inhabitants from 1980 to 2012.
Similarly
, the population of
overall
species
also
remained constant.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words species, turtles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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