The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

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their weekly income between 1968 and 2018. Overview ,

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1968 most of them spend their money

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foods

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2018

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it change to leisure.

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spending things in 1968 is fule and power apart of that fule and power , personal goods are

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in 2018. In 1968, 35% of income

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in 2018 it is more than 20% . Housing

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and foot wears

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housing and food

spendicher

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. Household goods same in both years.

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The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

Social media has completely changed the way family and friends communicate with each other. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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