The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese studenta studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese studenta studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Vietnamese pupils acquiring studies in France,Russia and America from 2000 to 2015.the
number
of students is represented in millions.
Overall
, the
number
of students migrating to America showed a massive increase throughout the years.
While
fewer people choose to go to Russia and their ratio
further
decreased in subsequent years.
Moreover
, the average
number
of students moving to France
also
increased a bit in
this
time period. By studying the graph closely, we can see that 1.5
million
Vietnamese went to America for studying in 2000 which
further
rose to 5
million
in 2015. Learners who chose to study in Russia were about 3
million
in 2000 but
further
decreased to 2.5
million
with a major drop in 2012 to less than 2
million
. The
number
of Vietnamese scholars in France was around 3.5
million
in 2000
then
lowered to 2.5
million
in 2005 and showed a plateau till 2010 and
then
further
inclined to 4.5
million
by 2015.
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