You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Councilor,

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Dear Councilor I am Mike Anderson,Currently living in the City Center building opposite the National

Park

.I am writing

this

letter to do some important recommendations to improve the quality of our public

park

which is located in the centre of the city.I would like to purpose kindly providing a special play area for the

kids

to enjoy quality time in the

park

. Let me explain the current situation of the

park

since I am living at the same address for almost five years.the main concern here in the

park

is there is no dedicated play area for the

kids

and we are seeing an increasing number of accidents day to day.

Moreover

Kids

are disturbing adults who relaxing in the

park

since

kids

do not have any activity area in the

park

.please consider

this

request and I believe that

this

will great solution for the current situation.

In addition

, if possible please take the necessary action as soon as possible as we are approaching the school holidays, because during school vacation our

park

is filled with

kids

therefore

, if possible kindly do the needful before the holidays, Thank you for your attention and kind cooperation. Yours faithfully Mike Anderson

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