You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Councilor,

Dear Councilor My name is Jake Corner and I am living in the downtown area near to city walk garden. I am writing
this
letter to suggest that you can arrange a dedicated children's play space for our
kids
in the city walk garden since our
kids
do not have any play space nearby our community. let me explain the situation in the park since I am living in
this
range
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very long
time
, mostly, in the evening garden is packed with adults and older age people,
moreover
, there is not enough space available for our
kids
to enjoy their free
time
in the evening. I strongly suggest a separate play area which can access only to ages below 10
kids
may help to solve our problem
as well as
it will help to reduce accidents which we are seeing day to day. Could you please take some necessary action as soon as possible so our
kids
can enjoy their free
time
without any hustle, Thank you for your attention and kind cooperation regarding
this
matter and if you need any more clarification please reach out at any
time
through email. Yours faithfully Jake
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