Percentage of people consuming fruits vegetables in the UK

The UK is the most famous destination. The above chart shows the percentage of the
population
in the UK who consumed the recommended daily
amount
of
fruits
and
vegetables
in 2002, 2006 and 2010. The chart has been categorised into 3 people i.e.
women
,
men
and
children
. In the year 2002
men
's daily
amount
of
fruits
and
vegetables
is 22%,
women
's daily
amount
is 25%, and
children
's daily
amount
is 11%.
Similarly
, they have mentioned the
population
for 2006 and 2010. As compared to the year 2002 to 2006,
men
's daily
amount
of
fruits
and
vegetables
has
been
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increased from 22% to 28%,
women
's daily
amount
has increased from 25% to 32% and
children
's daily
amount
has increased from 11% to 16%.
This
shows that between 2002 to 2006 i.e. 4 years there has been
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in
population
. When we look at the
population
for the year 2010,
men
's daily
amount
of
fruits
and
vegetables
is 24%,
women
's daily
amount
is 27%, and
children
's daily
amount
is 14%. The following chart shows that the
population
of the UK goes up and down and it
also
matters to the productivity of the products.
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