The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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The maps illustrate how Islip town centre is now and its future development plan.

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this

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small city will have significant changes; replace and extend the countryside with more shops and public services, construct a dual carriageway around the city, turn the main

road

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into a pedestrians-only site and build more houses.

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, the school and the shops to the south of the main

road

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will remain in the same place. The parking area will be downsized. The shops will be demolished and expanded to the north of the city, occupying the countryside for building a bus station,a shopping centre , a car park and new housing with a

road

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to the main

dual-carriage way

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. In the south new housing will be added with access to a park. All the public buildings and individual houses will have access to a

road

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

141 words

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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