The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate how Islip town centre is now and its future development plan.
Overall
, this
small city will have significant changes; replace and extend the countryside with more shops and public services, construct a dual carriageway around the city, turn the main road
into a pedestrians-only site and build more houses. However
, the school and the shops to the south of the main road
will remain in the same place. The parking area will be downsized.
The shops will be demolished and expanded to the north of the city, occupying the countryside for building a bus station,a shopping centre , a car park and new housing with a road
to the main dual-carriage way
. In the south new housing will be added with access to a park. All the public buildings and individual houses will have access to a Correct your spelling
dual-carriageway
road
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