In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

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majority of the admission gain their knowledge from their
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, but the modern
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has totally changed
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the invention of information technology,it has taken number one place among the vast majority of
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in the
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,I mostly agreed that in current education ,system part of
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involvement has been reducing significantly.but I
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believe the learning styles vary from person to person and
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some parts of the
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teachers
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are still playing a major role ,especially in third-
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countries
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. Most
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Nowadays own a laptop or a tablet which they have easy access to the internet and they can get any kind of information within a seconds all day long ,and the other hand
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still used to do old days teaching styles which are not matched with
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students
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the majority of the
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use to self-study in their house and in colleges they do not pay much attention to their
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as they already knew in advance what
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is going to teach them.
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reason I mostly believe that
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role is fading away in developed
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. When we talk about undevout
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still
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are playing a major role in
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' life.as most of the
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in third-
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have no access to the internet
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there were very few
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can afford electronic devices like laptops and tablets. in my ,opinion I mostly agreed that the
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's act will be very minimally required for the modern education system as current technology has mostly taken over the
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's duties and responsibilities.
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