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Band 4

Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.

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The Olympics and the
world
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cub
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 are conducted by the
country
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 and are said
as
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 the hosting
countries
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 .the hosting
countries
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 have benefited from other
countries
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 in the area of tourism and one of the members of the
league
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 match the hosting
countries
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 are directly entered into the
league
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 matches .the
world
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cub
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 is conducted in the mass population so every
country
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 has participated .the member of the federation in
world
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cub
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 has conducted the qualifier round so every
country
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 participate in the qualifier round and come to the
league
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 matches but the rule is not to fit the hosting
countries
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 they are directly entered into the
league
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 match .
for example
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 in
FIFA
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the FIFA
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world
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 cup of 2022 the
qutar
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guitar
 conducted the
world
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cub
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 ,so the
qutar
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guitar
 had no prerequisite they directly entered into the knockout
league
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 matches . the hosting
country
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 has financial benefits from tourism.
country
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 from
the
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different region enters the hosting
country
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 to see the
world
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 cup matches and
also
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 the
country
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's name has been widely sounded to the large population .
for instance
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 many western people did not know guitar after successively conducting the FIFA
world
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cub
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 .the many people travel to the
qutar
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guitar
 and explore the beauty of the
country
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 .
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 ,the hosting
country
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 has pride in the
world
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 cup match and the
country
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 finically benefits from a wider population and the
country
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 directly with the
world
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cub
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 big team with no prerequisite it somehow helps to improve the sport in the
country
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