The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the results of surveys in one African country regarding teenagers' main reasons for using their
phones
from 2016 to 2019.
Overall
, the percentage of people whose reason for using a mobile
phone
concerned social networks was the highest in the four charts examined. Meanwhile, the
figures
for those who use their
phones
for making
phone
calls were the lowest among the remainder. The percentage of the main reason for using social networks was 50% in 2016, after which it saw a slight decrease to 48% in 2017, before experiencing a rise in 2018 and 2019, with the
figures
being 51% and 56% respectively. Similarities can
also
be seen in the proportion of people whose reason for utilizing a
phone
is related to a digital camera, with the respective
figures
being 15%, 18%, and 20%.   Regarding the aforementioned categories,
while
25% of the
phone
subscribers said that they bought
phones
 for sending emails in 2016, only 10% of the
figures
subscribed to
phones
for making calls. After that, it saw a slow decline in the percentage of teenagers whose reasons were for sending emails from 2017 to 2019, with the
figures
being 24%, 20%, and 19% respectively. Meanwhile, the proportion of reasons for
phone
calls saw a slight fluctuation in the first three-year period before ending at 5% by the final year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phones, phone, figures with synonyms.
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