Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, using much
time
every single day on smartphones becomes a common phenomenon with
youngsters. There are many causes for Change preposition
among
this
trend and I believe that this
is a negative development.
Many reasons lead to this
situation. First of all, most of
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parents
focus on their work and their personal life rather than spending Add an article
the parents
time
on
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with
children
who are easily interested in smartphones. It is clear that
they will leave their phones for their babies instead
of their time
, and gradually, children
are Add a missing verb
having difficult
difficult
to be away Replace the word
difficulty
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from the
the
cellphones. Change the word
their
For instance
, some adults have to work from home today, and in order to avoid to be
bothered by their daughters or their sons, they give their phones to them. Change the verb form
being
Next,
along with
the development of digital technology, there are many attacked programs, videos, posts, photos, etc.. found through cellphones. And with naive minds, young people are quickly addicted by
them. A particular example here is Tiktok has developed video posts feature, a lot of young people spend much Change preposition
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on it to design no sense contents
there or simply to watch videos posted there.
After all, I suppose that Fix the agreement mistake
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this
phenomenon is a negative change. Initially
, there is no doubt that the coheshion
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family
would be down because members do not have much Add an article
the family
time
together such
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children
often tell
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medias
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instead
of their parents. Moreover
, on the internet, there are many things with no reasonable contents
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children
, this
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In particular
, they think that going to school might be not needed because there are some people on youtube can
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who can
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money without any diploma.
In conclusion, Add the preposition
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although
many reasons make adolescents spend hours on smartphones, but
I totally agree that Remove the conjunction
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this
trend would bring negative
impact Correct article usage
a negative
to
them and parents should care more about these.Change preposition
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