Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, using much
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every single day on smartphones becomes a common phenomenon
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among
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youngsters. There are many causes for
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trend and I believe that
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is a negative development. Many reasons lead to
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situation. First of all, most
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parents
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the parents
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focus on their work and their personal life rather than spending
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their
children
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who are easily interested in smartphones.
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they will leave their phones for their babies
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of their
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, and gradually,
children
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are
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to be away
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the
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cellphones.
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, some adults have to work from home today, and in order to avoid
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bothered by their daughters or their sons, they give their phones to them.
Next,
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along with
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the development of digital technology, there are many attacked programs, videos, posts, photos, etc.. found through cellphones. And with naive minds, young people are quickly addicted
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them. A particular example here is Tiktok has developed video posts feature, a lot of young people spend much
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on it to design no sense
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there or simply to watch videos posted there. After all, I suppose that
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phenomenon is a negative change.
Initially
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, there is no doubt that the
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cohesion
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family
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the family
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would be down because members do not have much
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together
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such
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as
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some
children
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often
tell
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their personal stories or problems with their friends or
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posting
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on social
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media
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instead
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of their parents.
Moreover
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, on the internet, there are many things with no reasonable
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for
children
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,
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this
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can make their thoughts
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the wrong way.
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, they think that going to school might be not needed because there are some people on youtube
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earn a
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money without any diploma. In conclusion,
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many reasons make adolescents spend hours on smartphones,
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I totally agree that
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trend would bring
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a negative
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impact
to
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them and parents should care more about these.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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