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Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of home-schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

#parents #children #home #school
In
this
 modern era, many people hold a strong view that homeschooling is
better
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 way to develop
children
instead
 of sending them to school.
This
 statement is valid to some extent but I would say that homeschooling
less
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 benefit as compared to
schools
.
To begin
 with, there could be some reasons to choose
homeschooling
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 for parents. First and foremost, parents do not want to send their kids to
schools
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school
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 because they
feels
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 alone at home and sometimes they like to give the education to their infants at home so they can spend time with them
as well as
,
children's
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children
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 can get a plentiful time to do study,
children
 can do study whenever they want and they do not need to follow any schedule.
For example
, some kids are not excellent in math but
studying
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 at home, they can obtain a lot of time to solve math questions
instead
 of focusing on other subjects that they already have a firm good grasp on. There are
also
 some drawbacks of homeschooling that could not ignore.
Firstly
,
schools
 can be better
place
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 for
kid's
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kid
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 to grow academically and mentally than homeschooling. No doubt that there are more qualified teachers in school as they have excellent knowledge of all subjects
because
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 of
this
,
children
 can get better academic education
as well as
 practical knowledge.
Besides
this
,
schools
 have large numbers of students
due to
this
,
children's
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 can enhance their communication, teamwork and cooperation skills.
As a result
, it will help
to
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them when they will work with teams in
their
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 future. In conclusion, homeschooling is better if parents cannot send
to
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their
kid's
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kids
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in
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schools
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school
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 because of some reasons but
in
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person
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 study is
excellent
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 choice for their
children
's better growth.
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