Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of home-schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

In

this

modern era, many people hold a strong view that homeschooling is

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way to develop

children

instead

of sending them to school.

This

statement is valid to some extent but I would say that homeschooling

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benefit as compared to

schools

.

To begin

with, there could be some reasons to choose

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for parents. First and foremost, parents do not want to send their kids to

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because they

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alone at home and sometimes they like to give the education to their infants at home so they can spend time with them

as well as

,

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can get a plentiful time to do study,

children

can do study whenever they want and they do not need to follow any schedule.

For example

, some kids are not excellent in math but

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at home, they can obtain a lot of time to solve math questions

instead

of focusing on other subjects that they already have a firm good grasp on. There are

also

some drawbacks of homeschooling that could not ignore.

Firstly

,

schools

can be better

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for

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to grow academically and mentally than homeschooling. No doubt that there are more qualified teachers in school as they have excellent knowledge of all subjects

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of

this

,

children

can get better academic education

as well as

practical knowledge.

Besides

this

,

schools

have large numbers of students

due to

this

,

children's

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can enhance their communication, teamwork and cooperation skills.

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, it will help

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them when they will work with teams in

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future. In conclusion, homeschooling is better if parents cannot send

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their

kid's

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schools

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because of some reasons but

in

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person

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study is

excellent

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choice for their

children

's better growth.