More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encorage more people to eat healther and exercise?
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To begin
with, the trend of a healthy lifestyle is more common in today's world. Due to
technological development. People
can get easily some healthy information on social midia
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also
they get about nutrition and phycical
activities. To Correct your spelling
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, some articles provide information about how to cook healthy Correct your spelling
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food
. making people
follow and cook nutritional meals easier than in the past. moreover
, the intenet
can provide Correct your spelling
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informaion
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phycical
activities which Correct your spelling
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people
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Thus
, now, internet
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the internet
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so many things so Change the verb form
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people
can do all things very easily.
on the outher
hand, Physical Correct your spelling
other
activites
will increase and encourage Correct your spelling
activities
activity
people
to follow this
trend. For instance
, the governments should invest in public parks and gyms which can help people
to do more exercise and provide some equipment. Furthermore
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To sum up
, technological development provides information about the health of people
which encourages people
to do more exercise and cook healthy food
. Taking support of above
arguments, The governments should provide public places for Correct article usage
the above
people
and give knowledge to people
of a healthy lifestyle.Submitted by bhavendra.bhensdadia on
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