It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that the progression in
technology
will diminish the culture
in society. Another fact is that,
it will be very difficult to carry both of them together because they are on Remove the comma
apply
the
different corners of the scientific world.I wholly endorse Correct article usage
apply
this
statement and will discuss the reasons on
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in
this
essay
In the developed world , technology
has grown up systematically over the
Correct article usage
apply
culture
and believes
. Replace the word
beliefs
As a
result
the thinking process of humanity has changed because of numerous inventions made by research and analysis. The developed ideas are eradicating the myths and Add a comma
,result
believes
from the society which mankind carried out throughout their revaluation. Replace the word
beliefs
For
instance
once man considered Add a comma
,instance
moon
as a god , and laterCorrect article usage
the moon
the
science proved that it is a satellite of earth and it doesn’t have an effect on human life. So the exploration made by the technologies in the modern world will gradually decrease the importance of Correct article usage
apply
culture
in human life.
Apart from
this
, as the
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apply
technology
improved the number of people who carried out culture
activities and believers in Replace the word
cultural
such
practices are
on decreasing trend. When Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
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apply
technology
reveal
Change the verb form
reveals
the
scientific and chemical reasons , the ideas behind the traditional Correct article usage
apply
culture
has been failed to make more practitioners on them . The youth and children are not giving any interest on
Change preposition
in
these trend
. Change the determiner
this trend
these trends
For example
,many churches in Europe has
close Change the verb form
have
due to
lack
of believers and Correct article usage
a lack
was
not able to afford the expense Correct subject-verb agreement
were
which
needed to run the organisation. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
it will be very difficult to carry out both tradition and science together in human life due to
lack
of support from the public.
In conclusion ,Correct article usage
a lack
the
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apply
technology
revealed the myth and believes
with the help of science , so it won’t Replace the word
belief
be carry
out together . So I agree with the statement.Change the verb form
be carried
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