Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

Dear Mrs Norris, I am writing to apologize for your wireless headphones which got damaged. On Tuesday I visited the subway during rush hour. Unfortunately, there are so many people in time. I accidentally dropped one of the headphones. When I picked up it from flour it was broken. I felt really embarrassed and ashamed when I found broken headphones. I will pay you 100$. Please send me your card number. I hope
is enough.You can contact me on my mobile phone number which is: 123409. Next time I will be more careful. I hope you understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Luna Lovegood
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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