The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given process diagram illustrates the circulation of
water
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from the ocean to the air and through the
land
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it
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occurs on
the
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Earth.
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, it can be seen there are four main stages in
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process starting from
water
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evaporation with the formation of clouds, precipitation and ending with saltwater intrusion.
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, looking at the ocean the
water
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evaporates and contributes approximately 80% of total
water
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vapour in the air.
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Heat from the sun causes
water
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to evaporate, and
water
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vapour condenses to form clouds. In the third step,
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the cloud turn into rain or
snow
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is called precipitation. In the next step, rainwater may transform into different kinds of pathways. It might fall into lakes or become snow caps on mountains.
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, some of the
water
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reaches the impervious layer in the ground and some runs on the surface.
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this
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, saltwater intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.
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