The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provided illustrate the average proportion in typical American meals of three types of nutrients, including
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar, which may be harmful to health if consumed excessively.
Overall
, the charts clearly show that
dinner
and snacks contain more saturated fat and added sugar than
breakfast
and lunch, which makes the former meals unhealthier than the latter ones. To be specific, the first chart which presents the average
percentage
of
sodium
depicts that
dinner
contains the highest
percentage
of
sodium
(43%), followed by lunch with 29%. Both
breakfast
and snacks contribute to a relatively small
percentage
of 14%, which is the lowest portion of
this
type of nutrient. The second chart presents the average
percentage
of saturated fat, which shares a similar figure with
sodium
.
Dinner
contains the maximum
while
breakfast
carries the minimum account of saturated fat. As for the third chart, snacks have the highest
percentage
of added sugar with a figure of 42%,
while
dinner
, lunch and
breakfast
show figures of 23%, 19 and 16% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, dinner, breakfast, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average percentages
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • meal
  • typical meals
  • categories
  • high percentage
  • distribution
  • patterns
  • trends
  • nutrient-dense
  • data
  • comparison
  • summarize
  • reporting main features
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