In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
With the rapid development of the world economy, more and more countries have a problem of increasing average life expectancy , which I think has brought great troubles to
society
. Aging
will bring troubles to the country and Change the spelling
Ageing
society
at the economic level.
Firstly
, I think that aging
will have a huge impact on Change the spelling
ageing
employment
rates. For example
, in developed countries such
as the United States, the United Kingdom and Singapore
, aging
has led to a decline in the Change the spelling
ageing
labor
force and ultimately a decline in Change the spelling
labour
employment
. As the unemployment rate rises, social and economic development will be lost younger labor
because large Change the spelling
labour
companies
move out of the city. According to
the data from the Singapore
Institute of Social and Economic Sciences, it is found that in the past 10 years, an increasing number of companies
have chosen to leave Singapore
because they believe that Singapore
does not have enough labor
or young Change the spelling
labour
labor
.Change the spelling
labour
Therefore
, when the aging
Change the spelling
ageing
society
emerges, it will lead to the decline of the
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apply
society
.
Moreover
, Solving the problems of an aging
Change the spelling
ageing
society
requires the coordinated work of governments and companies
. For example
, to solve the aging
Change the spelling
ageing
employment
problem, the Singapore
government provides subsidies to every company when they recruit people over 60 years old, so in Singapore
you can see that many old people can get a job Add a comma
,Singapore
opportunity
. Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
Moreover
, companies
in Singapore
also
actively responded to the Singapore
government's slogan to give the elderly a chance to work.
In conclusion, Add an article
the aging
aging
population does have a negative effect on Change the spelling
ageing
employment
rates and resulting a lost
in social and economic development Replace the word
loss
especially
for Add the comma(s)
,especially
developed
Add an article
a developed
country
, Fix the agreement mistake
countries
However
, it is important for Fix capitalization
however
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the government
government
and Fix the agreement mistake
governments
companies
to work together to come up with new employment
policies. This
will allow older people to come back to the workplace and potentially become valuable employees to
the company.Change preposition
of
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