In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

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With the rapid development of the world economy, more and more countries have a problem of increasing average life expectancy , which I think has brought great troubles to
society
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will bring troubles to the country and
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at the economic level.
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, I think that
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will have a huge impact on
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rates.
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, in developed countries
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as the United States, the United Kingdom and
Singapore
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,
aging
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has led to a decline in the
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labor
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force and ultimately a decline in
employment
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. As the unemployment rate rises, social and economic development will be lost younger
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labor
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because large
companies
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move out of the city.
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the data from the
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Institute of Social and Economic Sciences, it is found that in the past 10 years, an increasing number of
companies
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have chosen to leave
Singapore
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because they believe that
Singapore
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does not have enough
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labor
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or young
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labor
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.
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, when the
aging
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society
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emerges, it will lead to the decline of
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society
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.
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, Solving the problems of an
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society
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requires the coordinated work of governments and
companies
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.
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, to solve the
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employment
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problem, the
Singapore
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government provides subsidies to every company when they recruit people over 60 years old, so in
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Singapore
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you can see that many old people can get a job
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.
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,
companies
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in
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also
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actively responded to the
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government's slogan to give the elderly a chance to work. In conclusion,
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the aging
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aging
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population does have a negative effect on
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rates and resulting a
lost
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in social and economic development
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for
developed
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a developed
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country
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countries
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, it is important for
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the government
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government
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governments
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and
companies
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to work together to come up with new
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policies.
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will allow older people to come back to the workplace and potentially become valuable employees
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the company.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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