In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

With the rapid development of the world economy, more and more countries have a problem of increasing average life expectancy , which I think has brought great troubles to
society
.
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will bring troubles to the country and
society
at the economic level.
Firstly
, I think that
aging
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will have a huge impact on
employment
rates.
For example
, in developed countries
such
as the United States, the United Kingdom and
Singapore
,
aging
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has led to a decline in the
labor
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force and ultimately a decline in
employment
. As the unemployment rate rises, social and economic development will be lost younger
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because large
companies
move out of the city.
According to
the data from the
Singapore
Institute of Social and Economic Sciences, it is found that in the past 10 years, an increasing number of
companies
have chosen to leave
Singapore
because they believe that
Singapore
does not have enough
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or young
labor
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.
Therefore
, when the
aging
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society
emerges, it will lead to the decline of
the
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society
.
Moreover
, Solving the problems of an
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society
requires the coordinated work of governments and
companies
.
For example
, to solve the
aging
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employment
problem, the
Singapore
government provides subsidies to every company when they recruit people over 60 years old, so in
Singapore
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you can see that many old people can get a job
opportunity
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.
Moreover
,
companies
in
Singapore
also
actively responded to the
Singapore
government's slogan to give the elderly a chance to work. In conclusion,
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aging
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population does have a negative effect on
employment
rates and resulting a
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in social and economic development
especially
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for
developed
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country
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countries
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,
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, it is important for
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the government
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government
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governments
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and
companies
to work together to come up with new
employment
policies.
This
will allow older people to come back to the workplace and potentially become valuable employees
to
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the company.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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