International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
In
last
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the last
one
decade, it has been noticed that in recent Correct pronoun usage
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time
more and more Fix the agreement mistake
times
people
are travelling different
nations and Change preposition
to different
culture
. It brings many benefits to local areas of Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
tourism
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tourist
places
. However
, some people
claiming
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claim
demerits
of Correct article usage
the demerits
tourism
as it destroys culture
and nature. In this
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According to
me advantages
of international Correct article usage
the advantages
tourism
is overweighted it's
demerits.
On the one hand, Correct your spelling
its
tourism
brings a lot of job opportunities for local people
such
as jobs in hotels, aviation, transport and tour guide
. As Wrong verb form
guiding
people
are coming, they will have
need Unnecessary verb
apply
of
water and food. Change preposition
apply
Also
, as a memory of the place
they buy some local items from the place
. Thus
, domestic persons
can start Replace the word
people
their
small businesses like stalls for snacks, historical Correct pronoun usage
apply
book shops
and corners for handicraft products. Correct your spelling
bookshops
In addition
, it also
helps to increase economy
of that state or country. Foreigners come to visit Add an article
the economy
this
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these
places
in their leisure time and to fulfill
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fulfil
there
needs, they will spend their money. Replace the word
their
Therefore
, it will increase the lifestyle of the people
living their
and Correct your spelling
there
economy
of the nation becoming stronger. It does not only open up the work opportunity to local ones but Correct article usage
the economy
also
representing
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represents
different
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a different
culture
. Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
The peace
in the world which is the dream for most of us can be possible by having different Correct article usage
Peace
culture
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cultures
at
one Change preposition
in
place
and respecting each other by knowing them and their speciality.
On the other hand
, there are certain natural places
which destroys
by human intervention. Change the verb form
destroy
For instance
, it has been recorded that from
Change preposition
for
last
5 Correct article usage
the last
years
the Add a comma
,years
Himalaya
is slowly and gradually sloping down Fix the agreement mistake
Himalayas
due to
waste produced by tourists and increasing level
of carbon Fix the agreement mistake
levels
diaoxide
. Correct your spelling
dioxide
Moreover
, at
some areas, Change preposition
in
spieces
are migrating from their original Correct your spelling
species
place
and as a
result
natural Add a comma
,result
places
are losing their essence and beauty.
In conclusion, despite having number
of disadvantages, Change the article
a number
the number
its
a great view to support Replace the word
it's
it is
tourism
industry as it brings Correct article usage
the tourism
a
significant work Correct article usage
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opportunities
, infrastructure development, Correct the article-noun agreement
opportunity
culture
transparency and Replace the word
cultural
economy
development. Replace the word
economic
Thus
, I believe that the boons of this
industry are outweighing their banes.Submitted by mayini711 on
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