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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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This
 bar chart illustrates the amount of revenue of Southland from three major exported commodities in 2000, the current year and the estimation for 2025.
Overall
, Southland has earned much more money from international tourism and dairy
products
 since 2000, compared with
meat
products
.
Besides
, it is noticeable that international tourism is likely to dominate among the three sectors
while
 the export volume of
meat
products
 will witness a downward trend. During the past two decades, the most significant growth can be witnessed in the amount of money gained from exporting dairy
products
, increasing from 7
billion
pounds
 in 2000 to about 10
billion
pounds
 up to now.
Similarly
, the figure for international travel
also
 grew during
this
 period, but much less significantly from approximately 8
billion
 to 9
billion
pounds
.
However
, a slight decrease of 0.5
billion
pounds
 can be seen in the sector of
meat
products
. Turning to future predictions, we can clearly see that there will be an upward trend in the income from international trips, with the prediction of reaching around 10
billion
pounds
 in 2025.
By contrast
, money earned from exporting dairy and
meat
products
 is expected to experience a drop in the future, falling to roughly 9.5
billion
 and 5
billion
pounds
 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, meat, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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