The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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bar chart illustrates the amount of revenue of Southland from three major exported commodities in 2000, the current year and the estimation for 2025.

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, Southland has earned much more money from international tourism and dairy

products

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since 2000, compared with

meat

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products

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, it is noticeable that international tourism is likely to dominate among the three sectors

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the export volume of

meat

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products

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will witness a downward trend. During the past two decades, the most significant growth can be witnessed in the amount of money gained from exporting dairy

products

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, increasing from 7

billion

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pounds

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in 2000 to about 10

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pounds

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up to now.

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, the figure for international travel

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grew during

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period, but much less significantly from approximately 8

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to 9

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pounds

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, a slight decrease of 0.5

billion

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pounds

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can be seen in the sector of

meat

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products

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. Turning to future predictions, we can clearly see that there will be an upward trend in the income from international trips, with the prediction of reaching around 10

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pounds

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in 2025.

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, money earned from exporting dairy and

meat

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products

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is expected to experience a drop in the future, falling to roughly 9.5

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and 5

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pounds

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respectively.

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