A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Selva, I hope you are doing well.It has been a
since we see each other and am very sad when you left the school
year.Anyways now I am happy to hear that you wrote to me. In the
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letter you mentioned that you are facing difficulty fitting in.Here are some of my advice.The first impression is always important to remember to keep your face smile that attracts everyone. Be kind and answer politely when they seek your need.You can
take initiative to interact with them, and be a good listener
they express their view in the classroom. I would
suggest you join the weekly students club where you can make friends from different departments.There will be small lunch after the club, there you can take initiative to introduce yourself and your interests which make you feel more comfortable. I know you play Basketball very well why don't you give your name to the Junior Basketball team.I think
idea will work because sports are teamwork where the players accept each other differences and play for the team unitedly. Here I finishing my letter and I hope that can help you.I am eagerly waiting to hear about your new friends and the name of the basketball team as well by your return. Best of Luck my friend. Warm Regards, Maha
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