The Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?

People

in

this

society play a huge role in the lives of a few animals and the leading issue of losing biodiversity. There are some causes which

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essay, I'm going to discuss

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causes and their solutions. First and foremost, many

people

believe that the citizens are

one

of the leading causes of the loss of biodiversity and

one

of the main reasons will be the cutting of trees.

In other words

, humans' mindset of building more infrastructures is hugely affecting the natural areas.

For example

, the parks in the city consist of a certain amount of living creatures, developed their food habitats and

also

made their home. Meanwhile, humans' mentality of creating buildings,markets, and

Industrial purpose

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places will

indulge

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them to destroy the parks and

also

ruins

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the life cycle of small creatures.

However

, if

this

thought process starts to differ,

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,

instead

of malls and large apartments built in every area, I think we should have only

one

for 5 to 6 areas

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so that there will be space for the natural environment to sustain.

Therefore

, It can help, not to contribute to the extinction of species.

Next,

another major influence by human beings will be

Pollution

.

Especially air

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pollution

is a leading crisis which

people

have control over, but specifically not doing anything large to prevent it.

For example

, In recent years, with the development of technologies and the growth in the economy, large job opportunities are available and

people

are purchasing all types of vehicles

instead

of using public transport to go to their jobs.

As a result

, air

pollution

has widely increased which directly affects global warming, leading to a reduction in biodiversity. The solution to

this

will be completely dependent on governments, to introduce a rule to the citizens saying , that there should be at least two riders compulsory per bike and 4 riders per car.

This

will stop families from using

one

car per person and there might be some downside in the number of traffics

as well as

pollution

. It is a big step though but, together we can strive to protect our environment.

To conclude

, it is true that humans have a greater tendency to affect the environment by cutting down trees, building more malls and buildings and contributing vastly to air

pollution

. It can be solved by

people

reducing the use of a single vehicle for

one

person and trying to use public vehicles more and

also

preferring to travel an extra mile to the malls and any other places

instead

of preferring the

near

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ones which can destroy habitats of many creatures.