in
society play a huge role in the lives of a few animals and the leading issue of losing biodiversity. There are some causes which
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causes and their solutions.
First and foremost, many
believe that the citizens are
of the leading causes of the loss of biodiversity and
of the main reasons will be the cutting of trees.
, humans' mindset of building more infrastructures is hugely affecting the natural areas.
, the parks in the city consist of a certain amount of living creatures, developed their food habitats and
made their home. Meanwhile, humans' mentality of creating buildings,markets, and
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them to destroy the parks and
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the life cycle of small creatures.
, if
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of malls and large apartments built in every area, I think we should have only
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so that there will be space for the natural environment to sustain.
, It can help, not to contribute to the extinction of species.
another major influence by human beings will be
.
is a leading crisis which
have control over, but specifically not doing anything large to prevent it.
, In recent years, with the development of technologies and the growth in the economy, large job opportunities are available and
are purchasing all types of vehicles
of using public transport to go to their jobs.
, air
has widely increased which directly affects global warming, leading to a reduction in biodiversity. The solution to
will be completely dependent on governments, to introduce a rule to the citizens saying , that there should be at least two riders compulsory per bike and 4 riders per car.
will stop families from using
car per person and there might be some downside in the number of traffics
. It is a big step though but, together we can strive to protect our environment.
, it is true that humans have a greater tendency to affect the environment by cutting down trees, building more malls and buildings and contributing vastly to air
. It can be solved by
reducing the use of a single vehicle for
person and trying to use public vehicles more and
preferring to travel an extra mile to the malls and any other places
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ones which can destroy habitats of many creatures.