the system used fir rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the council. In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my concern about the trash collecting unit in our locality. Society is very concerned about
issue as it is posing a negative impact on the surrounding. The vehicles used to collect garbage are not adequately serviced. It causes the spillage of waste materials on the roads spreading intolerable smells in the area.
, the staff is
irresponsible and collects the rubbish after several days.
is giving rise to the breed of mosquitos
diseases like malaria and dengue are breaking out. Children are
reluctant to play outside
due to
an unhealthy environment. People are tense regarding the health of their children. Elderly people are
avoiding going out and made hostage within their homes. I would like to bring to your kind consideration that measures should be taken to resolve the matter as it is greatly affecting human lives throughout the region. Maintenance of vehicles should be carried out on a monthly basis and attendance of staff should be monitored. Looking forward to a positive response. Yours faithfully, Maryam Saleem
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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