The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate an
island
in two appearances before modernization for tourists and after modernization .
The first map demonstrates a wild piece of land in the sea almost 250 metres long , with a small number of trees and a beach on the west side of an Use synonyms
island
.
On the second Use synonyms
map
it can be seen that civilization came to the Add a comma
,map
island
, it became a tourist resort with many amenities Use synonyms
such
as yachting , a restaurant , two accommodation zones for tourists with Linking Words
reception
in the centre of the Add an article
a reception
the reception
island
, Use synonyms
new
beach with a safe swimming zone . Correct article usage
a new
Also
, people introduced a vehicle track which is connected to the reception and restaurant and many footpaths , which can help people get to the beach from their houses .
In conclusion, it can be seen that a wild Linking Words
island
became an attractive resort for tourists withUse synonyms
accommodation
and many facilities.Fix the agreement mistake
accommodations
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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