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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree

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In today's world, where almost every articles and
books
 are able to access digitally, there have been some thoughts about the end of the traditional newspaper and magazine era. I totally agree with
this
 opinion and I will elaborate on my reasons below.
To begin
 with,
people
 nowadays are likely more attached to their phones or tablets rather than any
books
 they have bought.
Although
 some
people
 still spend their leisure time reading traditional
books
, it just happened to a minority of folks.
Otherwise
, there are a number of old philosophy
books
 that have not had any digital versions yet, so students have no choice other than find or borrow one from the library near their schools.
On the other hand
, these current generations generally live in smaller houses
due to
 the rising price of housing.
This
 can lead to the limited space they have for the book shelf's space.
For example
, in my own house, since we just have a few racks for
books
, we have stopped to purchase any
books
 and prefer to become a subscriber to digital platforms that provide access to all Ebooks. Admittedly, not only it becomes more effortless and efficient, but
also
 the price is far more reasonable.
To sum up
, we as humans are always adapting to the new era and
this
 is normal because we keep thriving and consistently creating innovative ideas. Ebooks are one of many causes of
this
 digital era where
people
 are more comfortable accessing everything through their gadgets.
Moreover
,
this
 phenomenon is common for
people
 who do not have sufficient place to collect their
books
.
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