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Now it is possible for tourists to travel into any remote locations. Identify advantages and disadvantages of this

#tourists #travel #locations
Excursionists and holidaymakers are stepping
to
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 the furthest areas of countries.
This
 may be positive
to
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 the finance and employment rate of the region.
However
,
environment
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 is suffering from that
occurance
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occurrence
as well as
 crime is increasing among the locals because of it.
Firstly
, travellers who are paying for the service and entertainment in distant parts of the world are raising funds
of
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 land.
Therefore
 that capital can be used to enhance the economy and manufacturing of the area
such
 as launching new education and sports facilities , markets, hotels and
recruitional
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recreational
 centres.
Moreover
, thanks to
high
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 demand by tourists, more vacancies are getting available , in terms of hotel managers, waitresses, cooks and administrators that's why the unemployed are taking advantage of it.
For instance
, Hawaii does not possess any economic minerals or precious metals but it is one of the
developed
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 spots ever known on account of the natural beaches that attract numerous vacationers annually.
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, the impact of visitors to the surrounding area should be taken into account. The more human beings step
the
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 land, the less space
are
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leaving
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 for the
surviving
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 and flourishing of flora and fauna. Every summer millions of people go picnic and barbecues and no matter how strict laws are applied, there are some who disobey them deliberately or unintentionally. What is more,
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pase
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pace
 is increasing because naive new
commers
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comments
comers
 are magnetising shoplifters and pickpockets
that
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is
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 doing harm to dwellers as well. In conclusion, even though
high
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a high
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 number of foreigners in
the
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rural areas can be beneficial to the economy of the land,
this
 is affecting
to
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the nature and way of living there.
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