Dear Ms. Smith, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue the project management course from your institute. I am very passionate about this course as it offers a great knowledge and hope to continue in future, but currently I have multiple commitments that requires attention as well. I am doing reg Khizar

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Smith, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue the project management

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your institute. I am very passionate about

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to continue in future, but

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attention as well. I am doing

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have to participate in the evening sessions to improve results after office hours. If I still continue

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and it will affect my health as well. I am thinking

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drawback my registration till I get free from my mathematics class.

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your summer

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. I hope for your positive response. Yours sincerely, Khizar

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