Dear Ms. Smith, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue the project management course from your institute. I am very passionate about this course as it offers a great knowledge and hope to continue in future, but currently I have multiple commitments that requires attention as well. I am doing reg Khizar

Dear
Ms.
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Smith, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue the project management
course
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your institute. I am very passionate about
this
course
as it offers
a great knowledge
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and
hope
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to continue in future, but
currently
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I have multiple commitments that
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attention as well. I am doing
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job
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K-Electric to earn bread and butter for my family
due to
financial constraints.
Furthermore
, I have received bad marks in mathematics subject and
hence
have to participate in the evening sessions to improve results after office hours. If I still continue
this
course
,
then
I will be distracted and would not be focused on other activities.
Moreover
, I will start feeling
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and it will affect my health as well. I am thinking
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drawback my registration till I get free from my mathematics class.
This
evening
course
will be completed by the end of May 2022 and I hope to take back admission in June 2022
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your summer
course
. I hope for your positive response. Yours sincerely, Khizar
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