In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messages?
Children are being taught in some countries that hard
workpays off .I believe in those words even though children aren't needed smart , and hard
workhelps them to acquire
time. it withstands a long
timecompared to other people. some are against the statement here we discuss both . Children needn't be smart but they need to develop
thepersistence to acquire
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for exampleEdison developed the bulb after he failed in 1999 times .if we get the thing through hard
workit will stand a long
timecompared to getting the thing the first
time.For ,instance jeffbezos started amazon as a bookshop retailer online but over
timeit developed into online shopping and hold one of the successive companies in retail shopping .
workhelped them to withstand a position over a long
on the other hand,some pupils are against hard
workand they need an instant victory .the instant victory does not teach them to hold
thingsover a long
timebecause they do not know the patience to acquire the
for examplein the United States ,
Americandriver got the price of 1 million dollars through the lottery but he wasted all the money unnecessarily. After 4year he returned back to his original
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workas a driver .
to concludewithout the patience to hold the thinks we dropped down to our original position
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- in additional
- for example
- for instance
- even though