Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking or baking. For them, it is better to study their chosen occupations in high schools. In high school rather than regular subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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we want to be in the

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point, nowadays, high school

students

are struggling to find what they are going to have

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a job

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earlier than

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past. If

students

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want

study

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more specific fields,

such

as cooking or baking, have to focus on what their want. at the same time, it must contain regular

subjects

. So I disagree with

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statement is some points. Most people agree

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that high school education is important. Learning basic

subjects

can

be influence

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positive

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way in the

future

for

students

. And

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is, of course, completely related

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who

want

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to attend vocational classes. Take for

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example

of

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mathematics. When

students

learn

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subjects

,

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want to be a cook, must know about the difference

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mg and g

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because it is important to measure when they are cooking. And another example is an Art class. If

students

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future

occupation is

cook

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, Art class may help with those

students

in part of decorations. At the same time,

students

who want to take part in vocational classes, have to learn more

cooking

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about cooking

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or baking what they want than

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in regular

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classes.

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is because they have a clear

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for the

future

. So high schools must

also

encourage them to develop

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their own way. It does not mean that take aside regular

subjects

. I am saying it is important to keep

balance

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a balance

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between regular

subjects

and vocational education.

To sum up

, in the case of

students

who pursue vocational careers, must learn regular

subjects

and

also

develop their own careers. The balance of

this

must be taken by high schools.