In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this?

The
number
of folks who are
intrested
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interested
in
history
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the history
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of the place that they inhabit is gradually enhancing. In
present
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essay
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the reason
of
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this
new trend will be analysed.
Communities
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Communities'
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desire to
findout
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find out
background
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the background
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of a
house
or building has several reasons.
Firstly
, Houses and buildings
are mostly have
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a symbolic role in each
cities
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city's
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culture and history, so being
inform
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informed
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about the background of where someone lives is essential in order to
preserving
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his culture. As an example, if I live in an old
house
, its
intresting
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interesting
to know about the story of it.
Secondly
, the place that we live
is
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like a member of our family, many people all around the world
are love
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their
house
thus
, being curious about something that you love is reasonable.
Thirdly
, sometimes a
house
can hold a mysterious story like ancient houses or
castels
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castles
that still
using
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by rich families.
Finally
, in some
cultures
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strange beliefs are still alive
amoung
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among
the members of that community.
For example
, it is a norm to know about the background of a
house
that a crime
was
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happend
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happened
there
oneday
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one day
and almost people in
arabic
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countries are
willingless
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willingness
about
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to
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inhabit there,
in addition
as
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a surprizing
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surprizing
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surprising
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example, in some developed countries
wierd
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weird
beliefs
are exist
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too, in
germany
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Germany
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, do not living in houses
number
13 is a
wholespread
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whole spread
,
however
, the
land lord
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landlord
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change the
number
, people are probe into
house
's
bachground
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background
about
this
badluck
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bad luck
number
. As an outline, cultural diversity all around the world causes several different
reason
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reasons
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for
this
new trend about
peoples
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people's
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desire
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to desire
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about knowing
history
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the history
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of the place that they live in.
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