Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Most people in the world think that always telling the truth is the single most desirable character trait. I personally think that there are several
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, in which lying is not only morally acceptable
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but necessary. In
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I am going to explain why lying is normal in any relationship. First of all, there are a lot of
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where somebody simply cannot tell the truth, even if the person wanted to. Everyone knows how challenging it can be sometimes to surprise someone. Because in those
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you are forced to lie, in order to not spoil the surprise. I recently hired my
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for his birthday. To get to the
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, we needed to drive 30 minutes.
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gift is something that works out way better as a surprise
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of just telling what we are going to do. So, of
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I told him that we are going to do something totally different. He was prepared to go to a casual lunch with me. I lied to him to ensure he will be surprised.
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it worked out perfectly well and would have been so much worse if I would not
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lied.
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and well-known situation in which lying is acceptable. My second reason why lying is inevitable sometimes is in business. There are
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where you are not allowed to tell the truth.
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say a
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a non-disclosure agreement with the company he is working for.
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, he is not allowed in a business meeting with a partner to talk about the things he
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he will not talk about.
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, the relationship is not harmed, because everybody understands why he is not allowed to talk about certain things. Another justification for lying would be a political relationship.
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to the NDA the
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signed, some
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politicians
, especially in a global
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, cannot provide all information to the public.
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is mainly for safety reasons. We could assume that there is a huge political dispute between the US president and the leader of another county. They are fighting about a trading route and it is almost escalating.
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discussion happens behind closed doors
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because if the public would know about the situation, it would cause panic.
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, in the next conversation with a journalist, the president has to lie and states that everything is ok.
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could cause a disaster.
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, the lying of the president is very important.
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