What health issue are linked to modern lifestyle? What answers to these problems can you suggest?

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Nowadays, the modern lifestyle is more popular, but that has
negative
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effect
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and
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for human health. Why medical
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are linked to contemporary lifestyle
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There are a number of problems arising from
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tendency,
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obesity
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,
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and cancer. One common
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is obesity,
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disease has
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world wide
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, the main effect is fast-food and that situation
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overweight.
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many
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choose
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kind of
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,so habitats suffer
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problems
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as heart, liver and mental.
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, the research gives information about thousands of people
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obesity
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. In the meanwhile USA the governments have
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significant growth over the world.
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every year
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people
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from
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. Another issue matter of concern is food a genetic
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because inhabitants are
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enormous increase and need more
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which companies produce in the
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laboratory
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vegetables
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, fruits and meats.
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, more countries are using that method
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to change genetic foods and end of
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that development
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cancer disease. Actually, that technique is
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by progressing countries. Another
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is
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developing
technology
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because
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humans want to do work
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causing little mobility. The state
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activities and
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on
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the humans, so
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situation
more
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dangerous. In conclusion, I will hope that
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issue to solve by
goverments
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governments
government
and humans. Indeed more attention
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that
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concern will provide
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remedy is
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on human behaviour
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