What health issue are linked to modern lifestyle? What answers to these problems can you suggest?
Nowadays, the modern lifestyle is more popular, but that has
negative
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a negative
effect
and Fix the agreement mistake
effects
dangerous
for human health. Why medical Add a missing verb
is dangerous
problem
are linked to contemporary lifestyleFix the agreement mistake
problems
?.
There are a number of problems arising from Change the punctuation
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this
tendency, such
obesity
, Change preposition
as obesity
diabetic
and cancer.
One common Replace the word
diabetes
problem
is obesity, that
disease has Correct article usage
a that
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an impact
impact
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impacted
over
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apply
the
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apply
world wide
. Correct your spelling
worldwide
Moreover
, the main effect is fast-food and that situation to create
overweight. Change the verb form
creates
Nevertheless
many population
choose Change to a plural noun
populations
this
kind of meals
,so habitats suffer Fix the agreement mistake
meal
medical
problems Change preposition
from medical
such
as heart, liver and mental. For example
, the research gives information about thousands of people have
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who have
a
obesity Change the article
an
problem
. In the meanwhile USA the governments have a
significant growth over the world. Remove the article
apply
Also
every year thousands
people Add the preposition
ofthousands
death
from Replace the word
die
this
problem
.
Another issue matter of concern is food a genetic problem
,
because inhabitants are Remove the comma
apply
a
enormous increase and need more Change the article
an
meal
which companies produce in the Fix the agreement mistake
meals
labratory
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laboratory
such
vegetables
, fruits and meats. Change preposition
as vegetables
For instance
, more countries are using that method as
to change genetic foods and end of Correct word choice
apply
period
that development Add an article
the period
a period
cause
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causes
to
cancer disease. Actually, that technique is Change preposition
apply
using
by progressing countries. Another Wrong verb form
used
problem
is devoloping
technology Correct your spelling
developing
,
because Remove the comma
apply
the
humans want to do work Correct article usage
apply
home
,for Change preposition
at home
the
reason Correct article usage
a
that is
causing little mobility. The state organize
activities and Change the verb form
organizes
spark
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sparks
on
the humans, so Change preposition
apply
this
situation more
dangerous.
In conclusion, I will hope that Add a missing verb
is more
a
issue to solve by Correct your spelling
this
goverments
and humans. Indeed more attention Correct your spelling
governments
government
on
that Change preposition
to
a
concern will provide Remove the article
apply
solution
. Add an article
a solution
the solution
This
remedy is depend
on human behaviourReplace the word
dependent
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