Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

it is argued satisfaction with high wages is more essential compared to
satisfaction. I completely disagree with
opinion. First of all, I believe that when you are satisfied with your
you will be very happy in your life. A third of our life we spent doing the
As a result
, if you are not happy with whatever work you are doing you will not be happy in your life.
, if you want career growth you need to do what you enjoy because its boosts your productivity. When you do something you will
hard for it and hard work will not feel painstaking.
For example
, an English writer named Henry left his
and started writing novels as he was passionate about writing and it lead to huge success in his carrier.
, happiness in a
can affect your family relationship .
In other words
, If someone is not happy with his
, he will have a bad mood.
As a result
, he will show aggression toward his family member and it will destroy a relationship. A good illustration of
is that many individuals who are not happy with their
are getting divorced as they do misbehave with their wives after coming home from the
To conclude
, I strongly believe that work satisfaction is more important than a high salary because it makes a person happy and gives carrier growth
as well as
stability in their relationship.
Submitted by englishpills077 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays: