In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,
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advanced
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,
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is included transportation, more than that,
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.
While
there are advantages to
this
technology
, I believe that the disadvantages may outweigh them. First of all, the
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advantage
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viechle can help
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greatly reduce car
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accident
accidents
,
due to
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attention
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the rules, it can
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traffic
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.
In addition
,
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does not need to hire
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, so it can help those
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companies
to pay for extra salary.
Besides
, people will have more time to manage
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their
business
while
sitting in the car.
Then
, another
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advantage
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efficiency, with no need for human drivers, driverless vehicles could potentially travel at higher speeds and follow each other more closely, reducing congestion and improving traffic flow.
However
, we still can not fully trusting on
this
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auto-driving
technology
, it is not totally safe,
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kind of
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still can be seen on the news, before we are going to accept
this
new
technology
, we have to be more careful.
To sum up
,
while
there are lots of advantages
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topic,
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still believe that the disadvantages may outweigh them. It might lead to
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economy
due to
the low
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unemployment
rate, and make people job less. So we must consider what will bring to us
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the risks of
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and it
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only about one country but
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world. Ultimately, the decision to adopt
this
technology
should be based on a careful analysis of its potential benefits and drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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