The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the way how metal
rods
are made in the furniture industry.
Overall
, iron and other materials have to go through a long way before they transform into the complete product.The first five steps include processes which are connected with the temperature change,while
others use mechanical ways of producing rods
.
Firstly
,all the unprepared staff is transported to the melting slit where they are heated to high temperatures.In the next ,step the melted liquid gets into the smelting cabin and the process which is called refinement starts.After , the machine produces melted materials and makes the shape of ingots.The following stage is strand casting where the material is cooled and goes through nozzles which helps to make them thinner.
Secondly
,after ,that the material which now is gentle can be rolled and can get the needed shape.To save this
shape raw rods
must be heated.The next step is
checking the size of the future product which is completed automatically.The perfect size is measured,hence
,rods
are split by the cutter.The last
two stages are crucial too,
because their product is marked and inspected.Remove the comma
apply
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