Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?
The modern ways of
communication
made the long-distance person
near you, and the person
beside you is
far. It helped people who travelled away from their families, who found a job in another city, or someone Unnecessary verb
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you
love to talk with every day like he is with Correct pronoun usage
they
you
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them
Further
, with the new technologies and applications it becomes easier to contact anyone far from you. Yet, every coin has two sides, nowadays social relationships are affected by this
and it made difficult to contact when all the subject had been talked about. This
essay will illustrate why I agree with the negativity of modern communication
.
To begin
with, this
argument will have two sides and everyone is trying to prove his point of view. Personally, I think modern communication
has its own effects on social relationships without being seen. One reason is, a word written might be understood wrongly which will inresult
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result
in result
a
conflict and things will never be back as the same. Change preposition
in a
Also
, when contacting the same person
every day, you will start to feel bored with him and start to avoid responding. Not only this
, sometimes when you meet him you don't have any subjects to talk about with him. For example
, I used to communicate with a person
now in my town but because of one word everything collapsed. To sum up
, yes it is a good thing to have this
modern way but in the manner of the relationshipmanner
it has gone too far.
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relationship manner
To conclude
, the coin has two sides some will say there is nothing about it and will argue, others
will keep following their belief. These types of conversations need a research project to know and figure out the thoughts of society towards modern Correct word choice
while others
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion