Some people believe that if the police force carries guns, it would encourage a higher level of violence in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some members of society think that if the police carry guns or other types of assault weapons, it would provoke a higher level of crime. Personally, I do not agree with
this
idea, because it is vital for police to carry guns in order to arrest criminals. On the one hand, quitting using arms can reduce the violence matched. The reason for
that is
, people will start to show reverse respect and will act more law-abidingly.
For example
, in some countries with low crime levels, policemen do not carry a gun with them,
instead
, they have pepper sprays or electro teasers that do less harm than assault rifles.
This
kind of approach is not provocative and represents policemen as a guardian.
On the other hand
, abolishing weapons does not guarantee the full safety of armed authorities and citizens.
For instance
, it would be impossible to deflect terrorist attacks on innocent individuals, in
such
cases, using the arsenal is the only critical solution.
Furthermore
,
this
option seems more feasible than the previous one because it is unrealistic to defeat heavily-armed criminals with just an electro teaser. Taking everything into consideration and concluding, I do not agree with the idea that the police force carrying guns would increase hostility levels since without them it will be hard to take control of the situation.
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