The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

graph illustrates the global mobile phone

sales

by brands, Samsung

Apple

Nokia LG

ZTE

between 2009 and 2013.

Overall

, the main feature that stands out from the picture is that there is two major company that controls the market Samsung and Nokia.

However

, there is a small

companies

Change the noun form

company

show examples

Apple

and LG AND

ZTE

. Without a doubt, Samsung dominate

sales

since 2009

moreover

, it increases by double in 2013, but

on the other hand

, Nokia's

sales

decrease from 425 to 250 in 2013 which led the company to rise for the most part in 2013.

In contrast

ZTE

and

Apple

sales

rocketed by more than 50% we can see clearly

Apple

sales

expand from 25 to 150 in just 4 years,

Furthermore

ZTE

has expanded but at a low rate.

In addition

, there are companies like LG that seem steady and could not change their

sales

at all.

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