The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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graph illustrates the global mobile phone Linking Words
sales
by brands, Samsung Use synonyms
Apple
Nokia LG Use synonyms
ZTE
between 2009 and 2013.
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Overall
, the main feature that stands out from the picture is that there is two major company that controls the market Samsung and Nokia. Linking Words
However
, there is a small Linking Words
companies
like Change the noun form
company
Apple
and LG AND Use synonyms
ZTE
.
Without a doubt, Samsung dominate Use synonyms
sales
since 2009 Use synonyms
moreover
, it increases by double in 2013, but Linking Words
on the other hand
, Nokia's Linking Words
sales
decrease from 425 to 250 in 2013 which led the company to rise for the most part in 2013.
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In contrast
, Linking Words
ZTE
and Use synonyms
Apple
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sales
rocketed by more than 50% we can see clearly Use synonyms
Apple
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sales
expand from 25 to 150 in just 4 years, Use synonyms
Furthermore
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ZTE
has expanded but at a low rate. Use synonyms
In addition
, there are companies like LG that seem steady and could not change their Linking Words
sales
at all.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, apple, zte with synonyms.
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