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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. Agree or disagree ?

It is often argued by some
people
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 that no one can become an expert user of any
language
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 unless he or she starts working and living in another
country
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. I strongly agree with
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 idea because
people
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 have so many opportunities to speak a foreign
language
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 in another
country
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 and achieve
confidence
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. When
people
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 left their home
country
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 and start living in a completely different nation. They must use their
language
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 in order to communicate with other
people
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. At every step he has to deal with a foreign
language
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, at work, at home at stores and so on, that means a person has so many opportunities to talk in a specific
language
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 that will obviously help one to achieve good command over the
language
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.
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, when Indians migrated to western countries, they do not have very good English their accent is completely different but when they resided in these countries for more than one or two years their level of English is way too high.
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 is because now they are regular users of the English
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.
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, communicating with
people
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 from completely different nations
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 helps
people
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 to become confident about what they speak. They may use a foreign
language
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 in their home
country
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 but the main difference is over there they have an influence of their mother
language
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while
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 speaking a different
language
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, which may lose their
confidence
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.
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, when they migrated to another state they can get
confidence
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 because day by day they adopt the slang of native speakers and when they speak in the same way as a native speaker does and build
confidence
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.
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, a report has recently reported that when
people
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 change their
country
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 and use a foreign
language
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 in their daily lives, it helps them to feel confident in every way. In conclusion, a person can only become a good user of another
language
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 when he speaks that
language
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 with others in order to speak with them and earned
confidence
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.

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