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Nowadays many people eat very badly in spite of the information which is available about ways to have a healthy, balanced diet. What could be the possible causes of this? Suggest some solutions which may improve the eating habits of the young.

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food
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 industry has changed humans' eating habits poorly.
Altough
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Although
, there are limitless documents available about
the
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nutrition and
healthy
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a healthy
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 diet,
people
choice
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 a fast, easy and bad
option
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options
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 for health.
This
 essay will argue the main causes of
this
 problem and possible
solution
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solutions
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 for
this
. The main
causes
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cause
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 of poor eating
habit
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habits
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 is
people
 don't know
the
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meal
preparation
 and alternative eating options.
Firstly
, getting information about a balanced diet is not an issue any more. There are tons of materials
contain
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containing
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 information about malnutrition and balanced diets.
Furthermore
,
these
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there
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 are
also
 lots of
videos
 about healthy meal
preparation
 and gluten-free recipes.
For instance
, there are
videos
 about
a
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meal
preparation
 for
whole
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the whole
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 weak under 2000 calories per day. These
videos
 can assist in improving cooking skills
as well as
 balanced nutrition awareness.
Secondly
,
people
 can easily create an alternative option for their snacks and
deserts
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desserts
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 which contain a high amount of sugar.
For example
, one of the famous content
maker
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makers
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 records a video about
sugar-free
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the sugar-free
a sugar-free
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cookie
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cookies
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 that
contain
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 only oatmeal, date and bitter chocolate which is a great solution for sugar cravings. It is true that some of the recipes contain Stavia
beside
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besides
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 sugar which can
also
 help to control the glucose level of blood. In conclusion, some
people
 prefer eating unbalanced meals in
contast
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contrast
 to so
many
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much
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 great
documentation
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documentaries
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 about
the
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apply
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nutriton
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nutrition
 and health. Lack of information
for
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about
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 meal
preparation
 and alternative eating options are the main causes of
this
 problem and
people
 can deal with
these problem
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through
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by
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watcing
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watching
 proper
videos
 about
healty
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healthy
 recipes and meal preparations.
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