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Some people prefer one on one lesson while others like group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In the modern world, some
students
 like to learn individually but some
students
 like to learn with friends. In my opinion, I think that individual learning and
group
 learning are both great because
students
 have many different styles of learning.
This
 essay will discuss great ways to learn by themself and learning by a
group
.
Firstly
, many
students
 love to learn alone because they are good on work and thinking alone. They
also
 think there do many best things when they do something by alone.
Secondly
, many researchers found that
students
 who prefer to work in individually will be business owners and there are people who are more confident in themself.
On the other hand
, some
students
 enjoy working in teams because there love to share ideas with others and there always work well in a
group
.
In addition
, people who enjoy working in a
group
 are independent people and there always understand each other a lot.
Therefore
, I think it
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very good idea to teach
students
 in both types because individual learning and
group
 learning can be positive and negative but the best way is to mix them together.
For example
,
To sum up
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