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Some people prefer one on one lesson while others like group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In the modern world, some
students
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 like to learn individually but some
students
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 like to learn with friends. In my opinion, I think that individual learning and
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 learning are both great because
students
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 have many different styles of learning.
This
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 essay will discuss great ways to learn by themself and learning by a
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.
Firstly
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, many
students
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 love to learn alone because they are good on work and thinking alone. They
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 think there do many best things when they do something by alone.
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, many researchers found that
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 who prefer to work in individually will be business owners and there are people who are more confident in themself.
On the other hand
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, some
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 enjoy working in teams because there love to share ideas with others and there always work well in a
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.
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, people who enjoy working in a
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 are independent people and there always understand each other a lot.
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, I think it
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very good idea to teach
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 in both types because individual learning and
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 learning can be positive and negative but the best way is to mix them together.
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,
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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