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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map of the southwest airport gives information about notable changes in the entire area and how it will change after the construction.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 there will be a range of new facilities for the passengers.
In addition
, 10 additional new
gates
 with sky train will be constructed. First of all, there will be
increase
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 in the number of entrances at both departures and arrivals. The cafe will be relocated to near
departure
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the departure
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 entrance.
Check-in
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The check-in
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 counter will be moved to the right side of the hall, and there will be a new bag drop counter in the original check-in counter site at departures. As for the arrivals, an ATM and a cafe will be opened, with a car hire service on the right of them.
Next,
after the security zone and customs, the passengers will be able to buy products at the shops.
Moreover
,
currently
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 there are only 8
gates
 with walkways.
However
, when the redevelopment process will be done, 10
gates
 will be added
as well as
 the passengers be able to take a sky train to go to their
gates
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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