The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture of the
process
illustrates aluminium cans
, which were recycled.
Overall
, the process
consists of seven main steps and it can be divided into two part
. The first Fix the agreement mistake
parts
part
is brief about the collection period of process
and the second oneCorrect article usage
the process
,
is about recycling.
The first steps start when the can which was used, Remove the comma
apply
it
Correct your spelling
is
thrown
into a special rubbish bin to recycle it . When all of the old Add the auxiliary verb
was thrown
cans
has
been collected by Change the verb form
have
combined
machine, it Add an article
the combined
delivered
to the factory. Where it takes four little steps of cleaning. After being cleaned , sorted , shredded and compressed the first Add a missing verb
is delivered
part
finished
.
The second Add a missing verb
is finished
part
start when pressed materials of cans
are heated and melted.
After the process
of rolling melted materials , it becomes 2.5 mm to 6mm thick. Then
Thick has been recycled and transformed into new cans
with 74% indicates of recycled materials and has been named as ReusingSubmitted by kamolovaruhsona4 on
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