The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture of the

process

illustrates aluminium

cans

, which were recycled.

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, the

process

consists of seven main steps and it can be divided into two

part

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. The first

part

is brief about the collection period of

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and the second one

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is about recycling. The first steps start when the can which was used,

it

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is

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thrown

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into a special rubbish bin to recycle it . When all of the old

cans

has

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been collected by

combined

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machine, it

delivered

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is delivered

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to the factory. Where it takes four little steps of cleaning. After being cleaned , sorted , shredded and compressed the first

part

finished

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. The second

part

start when pressed materials of

cans

are heated and melted. After the

process

of rolling melted materials , it becomes 2.5 mm to 6mm thick.

Then

Thick has been recycled and transformed into new

cans

with 74% indicates of recycled materials and has been named as Reusing