Some people believe that in order to improve educational quality, we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism on their teachers, but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals argue that encouraging learners to give feedback or question their educators including criticizing them whilst the opposing stance is that

this

action would be harmful and lead to a lack of esteem and disrupt the authority in the classroom.

This

essay discusses both sides of

this

argument, and

then

I will give my own perspective which is that it should be encouraged learners to insist on them. On the one side of

this

argument, there are people who argue that

students

should criticize their educator, the main reason for believing

this

is that it might lead to an improvement in

teachers

’ attitudes. Recently,

due to

the absence of criticism in a classroom, the attitudes of educators, which include the esteem of

students

have been aggravated. To change

teachers

’ awareness as an educational profession, it would be effective to promote

children

to insist on their arguments to

teachers

. In Japan, especially in rural areas,

children

have to propose teacher improvement points every month, and

this

action contributes to the declining number of dubious

teachers

.

In addition

, it is more effective for young

children

to nurture their social independence. Having their own thinking and sharing them, they become an independent person.

On the other hand

, it is

also

possible to make an opposing case. It is argued that these activities might cause the collapse of the class since

children

might misunderstand they do not need to show esteem to their

teachers

. Almost all

students

are still immature, so through criticizing, they might think that their

teachers

are not valuable people, and

this

criticism could change into a curse. In Japanese research, one-third of elementary schools have experienced a collapse of the class,

such

as an absence of

teachers

and bullying.

In addition

, some of the

students

who tend to hesitate to appeal might suffer from

this

environment. Compelling these actions has the possibility of the risk of generating

students

. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have their merits.

However

, on balance, I believe that criticizing should be done by

students

in view of improving class circumstances and nurturing

students

’ independent minds.