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Some people claim that many things that children were taught at school are a waste of time, while others argue that everything learned at school is useful at some time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #children #school #waste #time
In today’s life, people said that
children
went
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going
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 to
school
 isn’t helpful and
waste
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a waste
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 of
time
,
while
 other people believe that very useful and
have
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has
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 good benefits. In
this
 essay, I will give several reasons and explain
then
 give my opinion. On the one hand,
educate
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education
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 at
school
 make
students
 get up early in the morning so that make
they
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them
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 feel tired to
study
 and not
interest
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interested
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about
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in
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 the
lesson
.
Therefore
,
children
 go to class often sleep
then
 they miss the
lesson
 which
it
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apply
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is
waste
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a waste
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 the
time
 for
study
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studying
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.
Moreover
,
serveral
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several
 problems that
students
go
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who go
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 to
school
spend
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and spend
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few times
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little time
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 studying.
For instance
, many
children
 who have
home
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a home
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 far from
school
 take more
time
 to get there so they lost most of
time
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the time
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study
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studying
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such
 as
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the study
a study
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study
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studying
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 by themself.
On the other hand
,
go
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going
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 to
school
 that
students
 some good benefits. They can access their
lesson
 more easily so they can improve
quality
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the quality
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 of their
study
 at
school
.
Furthermore
, supervision at
school
 is harder so that can
makes
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make
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students
 attention to
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the lesson
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lesson
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lessons
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 and improve their knowledge.
For example
, Math and
Listerature
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Literature
is
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are
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 harder in all of
subjects
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the subjects
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 that
students
 need more help
of
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from
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 their teachers.
Therefore
,
children
 must go to
school
 to listen and get interested
with
Change preposition
in
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 these subjects because these
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
show examples
 need in the future. In conclusion, the administrations must solve these problems
about
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regarding
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 education.
Go
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Going
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 to
school
 to
study
id
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is
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 very important for everyone so
children
 need more
self-sciousness
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self-consciousness
.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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