Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Currently, an argument has been appearing since the 21st century between two groups of individuals. One of the groups states that the primary environmental
problem
is the
loss
of
biodiversity
,
while
another group believes that there are more vital serious
problems
compared with it. In my humble opinion, I very much support the latter one. Primarily, the
loss
of
biodiversity
does bring a harmful influence on human society, like it can affect human
food
security because it can jeopardize the whole
food
chain.
However
, these types of
problems
that are caused by the
loss
of
biodiversity
could be included by other environmental
problems
such
as
climate
change
.
This
is because
climate
change
fails the
food
harvest
due to
droughts or floods. Meanwhile, it is undisputable fact that
climate
change
cause a high occurrence of wildfires, and these kinds of natural calamities definitely result in a more serious
loss
of
biodiversity
.
For example
, a 2020 report from an Australian newspaper, stated that up to approximately 10 thousand Koala death in wildfires happened on the Australian mainland.
Consequently
, compared with the
loss
of
biodiversity
,
climate
change
obviously has become a more essential environmental
problem
.
In addition
, from a long-term perspective, the
loss
of
biodiversity
is the most vital environmental issue, since it implies the
loss
of gene diversity and it may cause humans will be vulnerable to an incurable disease.
However
, recently, a famine
that is
caused by soil erosion is a significantly important
problem
that causes an increasing number of individuals to die, especially in most African countries. So, the shortage of
food
that is
caused by soil erosion is an emergency to address immediately. In conclusion,
although
the
loss
of
biodiversity
also
results in numerous disadvantageous influences on human society, including the shortage of
food
and the
loss
of gene diversity, the other two types of
problems
are more hurry compared with it, like
climate
change
and soil erosion;
therefore
, it is hard to say that the
loss
of
biodiversity
is the most vital environmental
problem
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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