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Many customs and traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to modern life and not worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?

#customs #behavior #life
Many communities claim that the style of life is no longer as before, so the manner of behaviour and
ways
 of attitude toward customs is not acceptable in modern life. But
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divided
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 into groups with different thoughts about
this
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 changes. Regarding
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my opinion, I partly disagree with
this
 statement. The first factor to consider is that traditions and customs have been built over years and they are worth to respectful attitudes of young generations.
Also
, there are huge numbers of people of age , who were the idol of well behaving and still can be modern at the same time with knowledge in
this
 century.The main point is that a new society can be still developed without procrastinating the old-fashioned model of traditional behaving , which is worth saving the history of culture.
On the other hand
, the second thing to reflect on is that some
ways
 of traditional behaviour can be really old and some parts of it might be unnecessary in some
ways
 or industries.
Furthermore
, can make people not adapted to
this
 life. But it can be changed and updated for more comfortable
ways
 for the community these days. In conclusion, it is imported to remember customs and
moreover
, to save it but in convenient models for people of these days
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