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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

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numerous of parents
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 to educate their kids themselves at
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residense
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residence
 rather than sending them to public schools because many people consider
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homeschooling
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 more profitable for children.
This
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To begin
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advadvantages
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and advantages
 of choose studying at home
children
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 that they can
studying
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without any pressure and they may have
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 at their own
residense
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residence
 and kids feel
themselves
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very comfortable.
iIn
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In
 particular,
study
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 at home parents can control their child and they can check
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the childs’
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childs’
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 lessons and behaviour and
also
 mothers and fathers have an opportunity to teach some moral rules.
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, it was very profitable in Covid-19 times,at that times learner
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 able to go to school in order to
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 from
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On the other hand
, it has some disadvantages that
study
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 at own property of residence. First of all, children may not
study
share
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 their knowledge with persons who are
same
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 age
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 them and they might be can not to make
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a friend
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friend
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 and communicate closely with them.If
toodler
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toddlers
 are studying at school they can learn about good relationships with others and they can improve their critical thinking skills with peers. In conclusion,
study
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 at home is increasing day by day and it has some advantages
such
 as
this
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 an opportunity for parents to control their child and
behaviour
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however
 it has some negative sides which is explorers may not good relationships with
others
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 students and
this
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 to there may be some problems when dealing with people.
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