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The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above line graph illustrates the details of the total finances of a particular regional government in Newzealand for the time period of 10 years (2012-2022). The values are calibrated in
million
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dollars
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.
Overall
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, The values for Rates revenue remained the highest and showed upward inline throughout ten years.
In contrast
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 to
this
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, Grants and subsidies were minimal from 2012 to 2022.
While
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 studying the graph thoroughly,it is seen that Rates revenue cost
initially
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 less than 1,500
million
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dollars
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 in 2012
then
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 raised to around 2,500
million
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dollars
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 in 2022.
Although
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 Grants and subsidies contributed the least part in finances with a value of fewer than 5,000
million
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dollars
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 to exact 5,000
dollars
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 from 2012 to 2022.
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, Borrowings remained the same throughout ten years with a value of about 900
million
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dollars
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.
Moreover
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, User charges showed an inclination from 1,000
million
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dollars
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 in 2012 up to 2,000
million
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dollars
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 in 2022.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected
  • fluctuation
  • steadily
  • significant
  • revenue
  • expenditure
  • surpass
  • align
  • trend
  • stability
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • forecast
  • decline
  • rise
  • consistent
  • notable
  • growth
  • factors
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